Persuasive Essay

Submitted by Sparkles820 on 06/30/2008 05:21 PM

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Persuasive Essay

There are a lot of problems here at Columbia. Pushing and shoving their way through the halls, the freshmen and sophomores are by far, the most frustrating. They are very, very rude and will make unnecessary comments. And watch out if you are in their way, because they'll just shove through you like a rhinoceros. And to top it all off, the making out in the halls, is just plain ridiculous. I think that instead of the current construction plan, they should make 2 different schools. One for the upperclassmen and one for the underclassmen.

Some teachers might say that underclassmen and upperclassmen need to stay together in the same school, so the younger kids will take the older kids as an example. Well, the teachers are wrong. The Underclassmen will mature in time. Another reason we should be separated is because it would give us more room in the hallways. And Finally, we should be separated because the freshmen are just plain rude. They think that they run the entire school, regardless of how the seniors try to teach them how to act.

Most seniors who encounter the freshmen try to tell them not to do something, or try and tell them when they are doing something wrong. We even try to teach them how to act, but it goes in one ear and out the other. The freshmen simply give us some snide remark. They don't listen to us, so we have absolutely no effect on them maturing. They don't even take us seriously enough to think that we have any clue about anything.
Throwing food, swearing at us in the halls, the freshmen are rude. There's no way around that. They try and tell how to act, and they think that they are the best things ever. If they don't like what you're doing, they scream and go off on a tangent.
Overcrowded in the hallways, the seniors need some space. The hallways are unbearable. If we are separated, there will be more room for us in our school, and more room for them in their school. The freshmen either need to...

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