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Words: 329
Rating: None
Pages: 1.3
submitted by: marta1
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Topics > English > Global revision exercise
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... In the thesis statement, the writer undertakes to
discuss the most important aspects of essay writing, which are organizations,
focus, and revision. ... The writer also explores the importance of
having other people read the essay during revision. ...
My opinion, the writer by taking in a consideration could revision of
the paragraphs to see what material needs to be removed, expanded, or taken
out that way, the writer should use a better method of organization
improving the paper.
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